Comic 804 - Blue vs. Gold, Page 33

17th Nov 2018, 12:00 AM in Blue vs. Gold
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Author Notes:

Adam C. 17th Nov 2018, 12:00 AM edit delete
Adam C.
Heheh... Awesome comments on that last page, guys. Really meant a lot coming home and seeing them. ^^ Lemme see if I can get mine ready before work....

Kind of the odd part in this comic is when you're doing stuff purely to get from point A to point B in a sequence and just realllly wanna get to that next point. Sometimes you can find something creative in the in-between times, but this was purely just there to set up the next moment. Figured that as long as we were doing that we might as well wake up Valerie because I've gotten soooo sick of having her unconscious. Kinda meant to have her absorb energy up earlier and wake her up. Figure it's like coffee.

Kind of the big problem with doing this is Marvelous Man became boring to write in this fight a while ago and has just been getting worse. He was always consistently written to have Boring But Practical attacks, and he ran out of those a while back. His only moves are punching, bullrushing, and beam-spamming. The fun parts of the fight entirely consist of watching the kids wail on him.

Bit of fun on the backgrounds, at least. Get to see a bit more of Sapphire City, like that dragon statue... Just kinda like seeing the city and get a bit of personality to the place.
Martin F. 17th Nov 2018, 12:06 AM edit delete
Martin F.
This page actually was a little bit of a rush job, art got behind schedule so I wound up having to throw the colors together on it this morning. Plus side meant I didn't drag my feet on it nearly as much as usual and got through it very quickly.

As Adam said this is a pretty transitional page, really just getting everyone back together and Valerie getting woken up. Not the easiest page to comment on given that but I am pretty happy with it. Hopefully everyone enjoys.

Comments:

Wolfintina 17th Nov 2018, 12:44 AM edit delete reply
The kids got back together in time for the big blowup, now that MM's sanity is completely gone this is getting really bad, the kids are going to have to really work at it just to stay alive.
babygirl 17th Nov 2018, 12:47 AM edit delete reply
So now the kid gloves are off, and now there is nothing holding MM back from becoming a real monster.

And on that I think panel two really shows him look wises as a monster, with his messed up hair, his once beautiful costume now in tatters, but what really makes him look like a monster is the twisted look and blue blood coming down his face.

The blue blood that's on his face is kind making his one eye looking big and monster like. All an All you guys did a great job on malevolent man.
Rastaba 17th Nov 2018, 9:59 PM edit delete reply
Rastaba
Yeah I honestly got nothing to say. I’ve already shared my piece on The Marvelous Menace many times. Go kids! Hope you don’t die but kinda hope you get seriously hurt so we get loopy Lenore! I feel bad for wanting that but it’s funny to me!
babygirl 18th Nov 2018, 2:37 PM edit delete reply
The Marvelous Menace that is a good name for him, that and my name for him malevolent man.

I hope one of our names for MM get's put into the comic.

All loopy Lenore is soooo cute.