Comic 423 - Blue Debut, Page 9

3rd Apr 2015, 11:00 PM in Blue Debut
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Adam C. 3rd Apr 2015, 11:00 PM edit delete
Adam C.
See, even though he's not terribly interesting, you gotta at least love the visuals. I remember being really impressed with the image of the shell hitting Marvelous Man in the chest and (because of Martin's coloring) the image of him strolling out of the smoke. ^^ We also see he has energy-beam powers, that's where the blinding light came from in his entrance for the last chapter.

I feel weird when explosions or something don't destroy a person's pants. I tried to at least have huge chunks of the shirt withstanding at least so it's more understandable. Sometimes it bothers me a good deal, others I feel it's reasonable, like with Goku.

Honestly, I'm realizing the "Get shot by something then casually be perfectly fine with the dust clears" thing is something that got used to death by DBZ. They really ran that into the ground. At least here I don't cut to the Blues kids looking utterly shocked and horrified when he turns out to be fine.

So yeah, again, would've liked it if I could get this sequence into one page, hope you enjoy the two-fer.
Martin F. 3rd Apr 2015, 11:04 PM edit delete
Martin F.
Fair warning, might not have any pages detailed for a bit between the three comics - built up a decent backlog on Blues and skipping on the detailing can help in getting through it quicker. It'll be back at a point before too long, just missing on some of them.

That being said, really like how the touch-ups on the smoke and the energy look here personally. Little thing but think they really add some flair to the proceedings. And that stuff is much quicker to do than the hair and stuff is so those things probably will continue to be detailed if they arise in any upcoming pages, though don't think they do too much.

Think that's really all I've got here but yeah, am happy with how this page looks. Hopefully readers are too.


Wolfintina 3rd Apr 2015, 11:29 PM edit delete reply
I disagree with that last sentence he is no superhero and has no business being one.
karmachameleon 4th Apr 2015, 1:35 PM edit delete reply
Amen to that! What he needs is a swift big bad beatdown.
Adam C. 5th Apr 2015, 11:52 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Heheh.... Glad you guys feel so strongly about this. ^^