Comic 432 - Blue Debut, Page 18

5th May 2015, 11:00 PM in Blue Debut
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Author Notes:

Adam C. 5th May 2015, 11:00 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Jake's design has some minor tweaks here; in practice his re-design looked way too old, like he was in his late fourties. He's supposed to be in his mid thirties so made the face smoother and less lined. Did also tweak his body language here; he's been working all day so he looks worn out and sorta tired. See that more next week.

Yeah, kinda the joke in the second panel is that Lore got her blood sample via needle to the butt due to her skin getting tougher and making it harder to push through. I was kinda unsure about the joke so downplayed it so it'd be implied. Like normal, Andy takes it on himself to cheer people up after seeing them down. Not just Lore but also takes a second to help out Lucy.

Did enjoy the kind of moment with this, with the group trying to be there for each other emotionally. I try to have stuff like that in here whenever I can. ^^

Was really weird realizing that we haven't seen Jake in the chapter yet. Again, chapter did NOT turn out like I planned, but think this page and the two after it make it end on a decent note. Remember after all that boredom doing these last three pages and feeling we were back on track.
Martin F. 5th May 2015, 11:07 PM edit delete reply
Martin F.
Not sure how much I have on this one, not helped by the fact I'm typing it on the Wii-U. Miss the manual letter writing option the DS browser had, way quicker than this faux-keyboard.

Like how this page came out, at least. If only for getting to spotlight one of the newer extras, but far from the only thing. For instance I tend to really like the Lore and Andy dynamic.

If you've seen the thinner line thing on WaR and are wondering when Blues will take it up, not until the next chapter. Think specifically the 400th page.

Comments:

Wolfintina 5th May 2015, 11:16 PM edit delete reply
Uh guys in the first panel you put an extra d in dreading and in the second panel Lore says you're instead of you.
Adam C. 5th May 2015, 11:20 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Eheh... Fixed. ^^ Thanks. Funny thing is I just edited the page right before submitting because of OTHER typos.
Guest 6th May 2015, 12:10 AM edit delete reply
...did anyone ELSE get a needle in the butt or was stickset really being THAT much of a petty jerk?