Comic 519 - Based On A Blue Story- Page 24

2nd Mar 2016, 12:00 AM in Based On A Blue Story
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Adam C. 2nd Mar 2016, 12:00 AM edit delete
Adam C.
That shot of Andy jumping back while Lore leaps forward is my favorite image of those two kids ever! Just look at how awesome that is. ^^

Whole page was just fun to do. Was basically an excuse to say "Let's watch Andy be awesome for a bit," and that's what we got. Had been a while since we did really, really heavy Daredevil Effects, so we've got him bouncing all over the place here. I especially love him sliding under that hammer in Panel three. And sliding down the sword-arm.

I'm also really in favor of giving Lore more Superman-punches. Think I've brought it up before but wouldn't mind making that her sorta signature move. She's also flash-stepping in the panel where she leaps forward, so still putting that particular move to use. ^^

I was nervous about being able to feel the impact too. I like that thing where when you punch someone so hard they kinda spin around in the air before hitting the ground, which is what just happened to Quartz. Wanna try and work on the "OOMPH" of the hits in this comic.
Martin F. 2nd Mar 2016, 11:27 AM edit delete
Martin F.
Really don't know what I have to say on this one offhand, though like how it came out. Guess one thing that bares noting is how it still looks a little weird when Andy closes his eyes in this costume. Eh, makes more sense than the alternative and probably will be gotten used to, just kind of odd being the one bit of flesh that shows on him.

Speaking of Andy, that third panel might be kind of confusing if you don't read the comic normally given there are six of Nimble in the panel so it might come off like he's talking about copies of himself instead of the whole team.

Not that he's doing that anyway. C'mon, Andy, Jake's helped with these fights before. Even if he hasn't really with this one.


Guest 2nd Mar 2016, 10:49 AM edit delete reply
quartz: Mistakes...have been made.
Lore:Indeed ^^
Wolfintina 2nd Mar 2016, 4:25 PM edit delete reply
Wonder where Quartz is going to land, looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Adam C. 3rd Mar 2016, 11:57 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Heheh... Really hope you'll enjoy. ^^ Might surprise ya.
Onasaki 3rd Mar 2016, 3:29 PM edit delete reply
I just realized... Andy's costume makes him look like Graninja. <.<
Adam C. 3rd Mar 2016, 11:57 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Heh. Not directly Greninja. Ninjas wearing long, flowy scarves that flap around in the breeze is a thing you see in a lot of games. I think specifically I got the idea from Strider.