Comic 522 - Based On A Blue Story- Page 27

12th Mar 2016, 12:00 AM in Based On A Blue Story
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Adam C. 12th Mar 2016, 12:00 AM edit delete
Adam C.
This was, again, an early idea for the chapter. Once I realized the suit was gonna be designed to help muscle control, it made logical sense for the Achilles Heel to be electricity. Again, seemed like a lateral move from the Symbiotes in Spidey comics having a weakness to fire.

I kinda think the characters are naturally evolving interests, which I'm trying to examine further. Valerie I get the feeling is developing an interest in science, which isn't something I would've come up with when first writing her. Will try and go more into this next chapter; have some odd ideas for the rest of the kids too for ways that feel natural to me.

But yeah, Quartz can now be easily neutralized. We'll see how this goes. ^^
Martin F. 12th Mar 2016, 12:03 AM edit delete
Martin F.
Not sure how much I've got to say here offhand. Kind of like that last page, fairly straightforward one. Really just kind of a continuation off the previous page's last panel, not all that much to it.

Do like how it came out though so there is that. Do like the kind of growing idea of some of the characters' interests and stuff, that's always kind of a neat thing to do. Not sure what else I've got, but hope everyone enjoys!


Wolfintina 12th Mar 2016, 12:07 AM edit delete reply
Everybody's expressions, especially Val's in the last panel, this is great, looking forward to the next page.
Adam C. 15th Mar 2016, 3:43 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Awww. ^^ Yeah, liked the expressions in this one too. Gladja liked.