Comic 527 - Based On A Blue Story- Page 32

29th Mar 2016, 11:00 PM in Based On A Blue Story
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Adam C. 29th Mar 2016, 11:00 PM edit delete
Adam C.
Heh. It's weird how much I like seeing that big blue bus again. Quickly establishes they're in the garage of the center.

But yeah, I like a lot of what's going on here. I like Jake playing Devil's Advocate with Marvelous Man and I like him being honest with the kids on what's happened. He asks first but he really doesn't sugar-coat anything, which I think shows how much he respects the kids and believes they're mature enough to deal with it.

I kinda like the implication that Marvelous Man just doesn't "fit" with the kids being in the same comic that he is. The kids were able to handle Qrime Qure entirely themselves, including covering their own tracks, and while Marvelous Man didn't necessarily mess things up for them, he did take an issue that had already been resolved and took it too far. I don't think he necessarily did anything wrong given the position he was in, to him he was saving children from a madman, but it shows the comic isn't big enough for both him and the team. This is on top of the kids going out to stop Qure and Marvelous Man already being there.

Maybe the kids should tell them who they are. Might held keep any toes from being stepped on and would benefit both to be kept in each other's loop. I dunno, just spitballing.
Martin F. 29th Mar 2016, 11:04 PM edit delete
Martin F.
First off, we've got a sudden surprise Blues character who just dropped in over at Wright as Rayne, so give that a look if you haven't already.

Yeah, this one's a pretty hard one to comment on. Lot going on here and some good emotional stuff, but think Adam pretty well covered the actual content of the page and the central crux of things here.

Two pages left to go in this chapter so stick around for those. Few bits of news we'll need to cover related to that but we'll cross that bridge when we come to it.

Comments:

Wolfintina 29th Mar 2016, 11:11 PM edit delete reply
Marvelous Man doesn't belong in the superhero world at all, what's going to happen now.