Comic 551 - Tangled Up In Blue, Page 13

21st Jun 2016, 11:00 PM in Tangled Up In Blue
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Adam C. 21st Jun 2016, 11:00 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
I like how the follow-up page doesn't specifically say if Vespi is telling the truth or not. ^^ In general I like the feel of this page, especially with how the hallway to the roof is dark and giving Jake and Vespi this backroom feel as they talk. Kinda wish I'd also had Jake putting his hand on Grant's head and shoving him out of the doorframe in the second panel.

We see again Jake's doubts about the whole scenario, which is something we'll be coming back to before the chapter's over. I dunno, seems like there should be more to comment on this page than I am. Martin did come up with a tweak to the dialog, so there's that....

This is kinda bad timing. I need to write more scripts tonight about what Marvelous Man is doing in this chapter, but submitting this page really gives me a ton of ideas for Jake stuff.

Also, Xandy and Melissa. ^^
Martin F. 21st Jun 2016, 11:11 PM edit delete reply
Martin F.
Yeah, kind of awkward timing on my end commenting on this too. Been a kind of crazy night and not immediately having my mind going to the page proper.

Seeing Melissa and Xandy is always good though for one. Really need to give them more spotlight, keep meaning to bring up some side stuff with Melissa in WaR but not really been able to slot it in and Xandy feels like she's kind of slipped in prominence a bit lately.

Another note, I do kind of like how Jake seems to ease up his guard a little bit around Vespi. Still pretty quiet and sour, but feels to me like he's at least a bit more talkative around her and if pressed on these same sorts of things by someone else probably wouldn't be giving quite the same answers.

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Wolfintina 21st Jun 2016, 11:19 PM edit delete reply
This is getting very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.