Comic 562 - Tangled Up In Blue, Page 24

30th Jul 2016, 12:00 AM in Tangled Up In Blue
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Author Notes:

Adam C. 30th Jul 2016, 12:00 AM edit delete
Adam C.
GAAAAH! Had a lot on my mind all day, laid down without setting this up and NNG!

Eheh... Sorry. ^^ Yesterday was a hectic day for both me and Martin and this didn't wound up handled. We're so sorry, everybody.

Jeez.... I'm really stunned by how little of Decay Conductor's dialog I have to censor thus far. Most of her pages in this chapter are already written and she swears more and more as we go on, until by the end she's likely going to have entire balloons blurred out. That said I did have a discussion with Martin if I should censor the word "Retarded". Especially feels weird for me since my chosen academia has given me a bit of exposure to people that the word would offend.

A lot of inspiration for Marvelous Man's character came from Star Trek. That line about daydreaming in class of the day of being a hero was something said in the show, and of course that whole thing of explaining technobabble with over-simplified analogies is something Trek is pretty infamous for.
"Like putting too much air in a balloon!"

But yeah, that panel where he zips past, the explosion going off behind him, was meant to look extremely heroic, like a kind of classic "Yeaaaah!" shot. Didn't quite come across right but think the spirit's there.

This is the 500th proper page, by the way. .... Really unremarkable, given that.
Martin F. 30th Jul 2016, 5:26 AM edit delete
Martin F.
Yeah, not really anything big with a few of the recent hundredth pages, is there? WaR's is fairly close-ish in the scripts and dunno if there'll be anything particularly noteworthy within it either, though it'll be into the next chapter so can't really say for certain at this time.

Anyway, to talk about the page proper... As can be seen we get some more insight into what exactly Decay Conductor's powers are, and a big more of a look at what the character herself is like. As was said before, we've got a lot of stuff in mind for her. Going to be spending the next few pages on this before we turn back toward the center, so more insight into her's coming.

Comments:

Wolfintina 30th Jul 2016, 2:42 PM edit delete reply
Weirder and weirder, what's going to happen next.
Adam C. 2nd Aug 2016, 10:34 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Hope you'll enjoy when it comes. ^^