Comic 563 - Tangled Up In Blue, Page 25

2nd Aug 2016, 11:00 PM in Tangled Up In Blue
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Author Notes:

Adam C. 2nd Aug 2016, 11:00 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Yeah, this dialog is about more in-tune with things I had in mind for Decay Conductor's lines. What sucks is I actually go through means to type out dialog for her and come up with creative swearwords from time-to-time, but still have to cover it up.

We're also getting a more direct look into her superpowers with this. So far she's been able to make items spontaneously combust, turn Marvelous Man's gauntlet into tear gas, and make a baseball into acid. Like I said, FMA was a big influence on her.

Marvelous Man's handling of this was sort of written to be boring. Punch to the gut with a really generic one-liner. Yeah, never liked "Playtime's over," it always feels like a boring line. .... I guess maybe there was that time Wolf said it in Starfox 64, given the context that was pretty cool.
Martin F. 3rd Aug 2016, 5:32 PM edit delete reply
Martin F.
Really don't know what exactly I have to say on this one. Sort of a self-explanatory one, and think what needed saying about it Adam handled really.

Do find out a little bit more about Decay Conductor, there is that. I kind of want to hear more about the whole teaching thing sometime - did she have her powers at that point? Was she fired or did she quit? Did she talk this same way around students? Did she end up snapping one day and killing her students? It sort of makes you wonder.

One thing that does stand out is that the offhand punch in the gut thing Marvelous Man pulls here is the same way he responded to Hazel smacking him in the last WaR chapter. Nice little callback from Adam there.

Comments:

Wolfintina 3rd Aug 2016, 6:47 PM edit delete reply
This is so weird, what in the world is going to happen now.
Adam C. 4th Aug 2016, 1:06 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Eheh... Do hope you'll enjoy. ^^