Comic 572 - Tangled Up In Blue, Page 34

2nd Sep 2016, 11:00 PM in Tangled Up In Blue
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Author Notes:

Adam C. 2nd Sep 2016, 11:00 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Yeah, Marvelous Man held up surprisingly well from that explosion, but is a bit rattled, as you can see; something that Decay Conductor takes total advantage of, transforming her coat into poison gas, as well as the floor.

Originally this fight was supposed to go that Decay Conductor really wasn't a threat to Marvelous Man and was just increasingly irritating him while not hurting him. Then when she filled the entire stadium in poisonous fumes, I realized that if she played her cards right, she actually stood a chance at winning. Decided to take the fight in that direction instead, hence this page.

That penultimate panel is supposed to be of Marvelous Man's super-speed blur zipping out of the fumes.... Also, the last time Decay Conductor attacked with poison you could see her pulling the gas-mask out of her jacket, but only just barely. A couple of people were asking if she was just immune to her own powers to not choke herself. Made sure to make her mask way more prominent here to show that that's not the case.
Martin F. 3rd Sep 2016, 2:11 AM edit delete reply
Martin F.
One touch I kind of like with how the fight's coming out so far is that Decay Conductor's really just working with limited supplies and having to improvise this whole thing as she goes. It kind of comes off with a more solidified plan and somewhere with more stuff to work with, like in a department store or something, she would be even more dangerous.

Not sure how much else I've got offhand, think Adam pretty well covered it, but do quite like how this one came out. Can kind of just see Decay Conductor thinking in the first panel, "I've got him down, move, move!" Though probably not quite that cleanly worded.

Comments:

Wolfintina 3rd Sep 2016, 2:22 PM edit delete reply
MM's ego is in need of some serious deflating, and he needs to learn it doesn't matter what he's become, he's still mortal.
Adam C. 6th Sep 2016, 3:50 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Heheh... Gladja like how it's going. ^^