Comic 722 - The Lost Spell of Baron Fontainebleu, Page 4

3rd Feb 2018, 12:00 AM in The Lost Spell of Baron Fontainebleu
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Author Notes:

Adam C. 3rd Feb 2018, 12:00 AM edit delete
Adam C.
Yeaaaaah, the kids have been losing a LOT of matches lately. It's been a pretty solid attempt to build up the Marvelous Man curb stomp at the hospital as a sort of culmination of a long losing streak, with every fight having a tough toll on them either physically or emotionally.

One of which, you'll remember, was handled in by Martina. Yeah, they ended that blizzard she started, but she was still winning that fight pretty handedly.

I was really struggling for a long while of who the first person they'd meet in the forest would be. I eventually went with Martina on the basis of her giving me more ideas for interactions with the kids, then Martin suggested this idea of Lore listing off their defeats and then her showing up annoyed that she wasn't included. Given her last chapter was kicked off by her feeling like she got snubbed at a party, kinda a cool way to introduce her into THIS chapter. ^^
Martin F. 3rd Feb 2018, 4:40 AM edit delete
Martin F.
Yeah, this one I'm pretty happy with, good getting to have Martina have the initial drop-in. We originally were going to have it be somebody else but once I brought up the listing off defeats thing it was decided to go in this direction, helped by Martina being quite established as threat to them by now anyway.

Admittedly not really sure how much I've got to say but hopefully everybody enjoys. Into the thick of it nice and early with this chapter - between doing all the set-up in the fillers leading up to it and just how much is planned pretty much for the best to just get right to the action.

Comments:

Rastaba 3rd Feb 2018, 3:34 AM edit delete reply
Rastaba
Yay! Martina and her as yet unnamed new accomplice I have been calling Georgia! My favorite of the kid’s nemesis, since Spencer doesn’t count anymore because they’re friends.
Adam C. 7th Feb 2018, 12:26 AM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Hehhe... I might wind up using that name. As for Spencer though.... I get the feeling he's one of those people where being his friend is only marginally-less-dangerous than being his enemy. ^^ Am glad you're such a fan of Martina, though.
Wolfintina 3rd Feb 2018, 3:55 PM edit delete reply
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.
Adam C. 7th Feb 2018, 12:26 AM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Do hope you'll enjoy it. ^^