Comic 734 - The Lost Spell of Baron Fontainebleu, Page 16

16th Mar 2018, 11:00 PM in The Lost Spell of Baron Fontainebleu
Average Rating: 0 (0 votes) Rate this comic
<<First Latest>>
The Lost Spell of Baron Fontainebleu, Page 16
<<First Latest>>

Author Notes:

Adam C. 16th Mar 2018, 11:00 PM edit delete
Adam C.
Yeah, tensions are just building, it's past time our heroes bail. I'm sick of this scene and really, really wanna just move on at this point. There's one more new group of characters but at least their thing is gonna be pretty clearly explained on Wednesday. ^^

This is another case where I totally would've gone off if I didn't have WAY too many characters to focus on here. I would've loved to have seen Nine Eyes dress down everyone and build up his personality of needing to be feared. Plus the "holding hostage" thing with Sareena; kinda curious what her response would be. I kinda-sorta wrote something but it's not that clear due to its placement.

I don't think I realized how much swearing was in this page until I asked Martin to do that blur thing and he sent it back. Weird. Either way, time for the kids to bail. ^^
Martin F. 17th Mar 2018, 1:48 AM edit delete
Martin F.
This group at the end here wound up thrown together pretty last minute, though we did pretty quickly form the idea together - might recall we teased it during the last round of Wright as Rayne filler.

Like the previous one I ended up asking Adam to tweak this page, mostly since originally Sareena was more directly confrontational to Kadaram and co., and I don't quite see that being her attitude toward them. It's actually kind of weird to see her swear honestly given BP was always kind of written around it unlike WaR, but didn't really see it as necessarily out of character, just a little strange.

All I've really got but hopefully everyone enjoys.

Comments:

Rastaba 17th Mar 2018, 1:15 AM edit delete reply
Rastaba
A semi-religious looking goody goody group with a painfully campy acronym that may or may not be equitable to a cult...there’s always gotta be one.

And always have to show up right when everyone else is about to kill each other just to rub everyone the wrong way and kick start the mess. Yeah, you really CAN’T take this, Val.
Adam C. 20th Mar 2018, 10:37 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Oh.... Crud, I forgot "Don't curse the darkness, light a candle" is a Bible quote. I actually kinda wasn't trying to make this group religious. Eheh... Erm... That's gonna be awkward. I might have to change that catchphrase.

But yeah, this is kinda above everybody's pay grade. ^^
Rastaba 20th Mar 2018, 11:54 PM edit delete reply
Rastaba
I mostly meant the matching uniforms that sorta scream 'CULT!' Plus I only said semi-religious LOOKING. They LOOK like such but might in fact not be religiously oriented at all. Or might be a cult. I honestly can't say. This is your comic after all, haha.
Wolfintina 17th Mar 2018, 2:24 AM edit delete reply
Oh boy the kids need to get out of there fast and the chaos levels are going to shoot past Pluto at this rate.
Adam C. 20th Mar 2018, 10:36 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Heh... Yeah, good way of putting that. ^^