Comic 754 - The Lost Spell of Baron Fontainebleu, Page 35

25th May 2018, 11:00 PM in The Lost Spell of Baron Fontainebleu
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Author Notes:

Adam C. 25th May 2018, 11:00 PM edit delete
Adam C.
Ughhhh... Great, I typed out my comments, Comic Fury erased them when the page didn't upload, and now I gotta type them again.

Oh, well. It's mostly me gushing about Ana since she's clearly my favorite member of the BP girls. If you didn't read WaR, her deal is that she has a second-personality that's awesome and triggered by a desire for revenge that can summon Sareena and Misty to her position. Shows up and gets stuff done.

I was looking forward to getting to write her, since I love the sudden shift in personality from the nervous geek always getting pushed around by people to the unrelenting monster. I tried to write her with this attitude toward Misty and Sareena of "You two work for ME." I had to double-check with Martin to see if she'd even call them her "Friends."

By the way if you go back and double-check her falling into the river, you can see that her glasses are off her face and floating in the river. Guess she didn't get a chance to grab them.

But yeah, this is the point where we get into rapid-fire changing of who has the book. Honestly, come to think of it this is probably closer to what the chapter should've been; people fighting over the book like four rugby teams falling from an airplane with only one parachute. I dunno it was hard to do that earlier when they were running through the woods, actually REALLY easy to do it now that there's a single book being thrown around... Eh, hindsight.

Martina's got it now, apparently. And it's cool seeing her bust out the ice-magic she was wielding back in Icy Blue. Had been wondering when she'd do that this chapter.
Martin F. 26th May 2018, 1:06 PM edit delete
Martin F.
Yeah, this is kind of more what you'd sort of figure the chapter would've been like and probably a bit more directyl how I would've structured it - mad scramble to get ahold of the book. Though it doesn't look like that's all Martina's wound up with...

Imagine this might be kind of jarring based off Ana's behavior throughout the chapter if you don't read WaR but yeah. She's a vengeance demon and so she's prone to flipping a switch toward becoming a lot more aggressive and dangerous.

I like how there's really no reason at all for CANDLE to have even told the others they had it before burning it beyond just being idiots. Seems pretty in line with their characterization.

Comments:

Wolfintina 26th May 2018, 3:08 PM edit delete reply
The chaos levels just refuse to settle down in this chapter, what in the world is going to happen now.
Adam C. 29th May 2018, 7:20 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Heheh... Yeah, hope you enjoy the next one. ^^
Reaper Dragon 28th May 2018, 3:19 PM edit delete reply
Reaper Dragon
I guess this just a grab and run contest...
Who will grab it next?
Adam C. 29th May 2018, 7:19 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Probably Vespi with how it's going.