Comic 757 - The Lost Spell Of Baron Fontainebleu, Page 38

5th Jun 2018, 11:00 PM in The Lost Spell of Baron Fontainebleu
Average Rating: 0 (0 votes) Rate this comic
<<First Latest>>
The Lost Spell Of Baron Fontainebleu, Page 38
<<First Latest>>

Author Notes:

Martin F. 5th Jun 2018, 11:00 PM edit delete
Martin F.
This one came together pretty last minute - enough so that Adam hasn't even actually seen it colored at this point because he's at work.

Kind of got some last minute script edits here. The big ones that come to mind are initially there was a different line from Misty which I wanted changed since it felt a bit out of character, and the, "No need to thank me," line was something I suggested as Adam was finishing the page up. Felt both in character and like a pretty funny case of her just completely missing the point.

I like how Martina doesn't even say anything. She just immediately turns and leaves, basically rage quits.
Adam C. 6th Jun 2018, 1:49 AM edit delete
Adam C.
Heheh... Yeah, didn't see this until I got home, really pleased with Martin's work on it. ^^ Fortunately we'll be wrapping up this chapter very soon and then take a much-needed break.

But yeah, since wiping out the book was the plan for most of it I kinda wanted everyone to just march away mad except one group. At one point I was going to have everyone (including Power and Nine-Eyes, both still here and still standing) run off pissed and then have just Martina of all people sincerely thank the kids for stopping Nine Eyes. The Cyborgs feel way more natural.

I wanna say Martin came up with the idea of Kensuke and Andy exchanging information and getting a way to stay in touch. Almost feels weird they didn't already. Actually, he pointed out that since they played Mortal Kombat together (and Andy apparently really liked Scorpion) Kensuke probably had some input on Andy's costume when Spencer had it made.

Again, you can tell Ana's my favorite of the BP girls by being the one to punch Ana in the face. Don't worry, I like the CANDLE group too much to not use them again, so there's no danger of them being eaten by bears in the woods.

For the record, I only realized in doing this script that I've driven from Atlanta to Houston, which Stonewall is quasi-based on. It's NOT a short drive. That really explains why Ana is so pissed. .... Also, I wanted to give Sareena something kinda different and affectionate to call her Grandpa. I was wondering about Abuelo but I kinda like Popi. ^^

Comments:

Rastaba 5th Jun 2018, 11:20 PM edit delete reply
Rastaba
Looks less rage quit as much as sulk quit. Like “What the heck? Come on...I’m going home....” but still, I think those Candle people would prefer they not open a portal for them considering they dislike magic so much.

Wonder how Candle feels about blue bloods and cyborgs though. She didn’t seem to mind using them to her advantage, but I am wondering if candle is just anti-magic or are they equal oppurtunity against those sort of powered and and enhanced individuals?
Adam C. 8th Jun 2018, 7:21 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
I honestly don't think CANDLE would have a problem with briefly benefitting from a portal if they weren't being used often.

As for the cyborgs and kids... I think their stance is they "don't blame" them for having medical conditions (kids are born as they are, cyborgs were injured) but would prefer if they used their abilities as little as possible to not disturb the lives of other people.
Reaper Dragon 5th Jun 2018, 11:36 PM edit delete reply
Reaper Dragon
Got to point out the finger in the ear + neck stretch ;D
Not what’s actually happening but still funny.
Adam C. 8th Jun 2018, 7:13 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
.....

I can't unsee it now!
Wolfintina 6th Jun 2018, 2:07 AM edit delete reply
The CANDLE group seem more than capable of taking care of themselves in the wilderness, it's when dealing with people and other being that their sense of self-preservation goes out the window, wonder what's going to happen next.
Adam C. 8th Jun 2018, 7:13 PM edit delete reply
Adam C.
Heheh.... Good observation on that one. ^^ Hope yuo'll enjoy what comes next.