Comic 808 - Blue vs. Gold, Page 36

1st Dec 2018, 12:00 AM in Blue vs. Gold
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Author Notes:

Adam C. 1st Dec 2018, 12:00 AM edit delete
Adam C.
Heh... Is the "last payment" joke poorly placed? I'm sorry, just feels like I'm waaaay too fond of it. ^^ Hope you guys enjoy.

I kinda wasn't expecting Jake to look as concerned as he was in the first panel. He's frantically running to the kids and once he's there he takes the time to make sure they're all okay while keeping his eyes on Marvelous Man. Given how stoic the guy is, that level of care feels like it went a long way.

On a similar note, I re-drew the second panel at the last panel to make the kids look much more frantic and eager to see him, including Jenny half-hugging him. Like, was trying to make it clear they're comforted quite a bit by having him show up.

Yeah, car's wrecked and fight's still going, but now Jake's taking part. I guess it's kind of a "nothing" page but really liked getting to do it. Like Martin said, gruop doesn't feel the same without him around. ^^
Martin F. 1st Dec 2018, 12:17 AM edit delete
Martin F.
Not too sure how much I have to say about this one myself. Is certainly a change of pace seeing Jake look kind of panicked, guess it goes to show he immediately grasps the reality of the situation here.

Yeah, I dunno, coming up a little blank on this one I'm afraid. I am pretty happy with how it came out though, think does a lot to show the group kind of coming together and gearing up for the next round.

Comments:

Rastaba 1st Dec 2018, 12:20 AM edit delete reply
Rastaba
I personally think the last payment joke was well done. Mind you, I usually prefer “I still had payments on it” but still well done in my view.

And Jake not only brought the Fontanium staff of possibly hopefully semi-magical butt-whooping, But is also apparently intent on wielding it. I look forward to this.
Wolfintina 1st Dec 2018, 12:50 AM edit delete reply
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.
babygirl 6th Dec 2018, 6:45 PM edit delete reply
I really like the look and feel of this page, its got some good moments
babygirl 6th Dec 2018, 6:53 PM edit delete reply
Sorry note got posted before I could finish it.
Anyway like I said this has good moments, like Jake's worry about the kids to the kids reaction to seeing jack.

But best to me is panel 4 and 5 to Jake dogging his car to him and malevolent man about to go at it, very good page.