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Comic 1171 - The City Far From Blue, Page 4

17th Jun 2022, 11:00 PM in The City Far From Blue
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Adam C. 17th Jun 2022, 11:00 PM edit delete
Adam C.
Heheh... Yeah, THIS was a page we've been wanting to show off since the script got polished off. ^^

Since we had doodled up those new costumes for the kids, me and Martin did have a question of if they should wear them in the guest chapter or wait until I was writing again. I enthusiastically gave him the green light and he came up with this adorable little diddy of all the kids showing off their new threads. Each one is just adorable, going into each one's viewpoints about why they did this and the basic concept for each new outfit. Martin even rotated the kids in the Persona Panels so they mostly got the same screentime here.

My favorite is maybe Grant because I just love the pose coupled with his expression, but Lore and Nicky are just so friggin' cute. ^^ Just whole page is great and a treat for us to show off.
Martin F. 17th Jun 2022, 11:19 PM edit delete
Martin F.
Yeah, this script was kind of edited in after the fact, decided we wanted to go ahead and use the new costumes so wrote up this page to give them a more proper introduction. Had a lot of fun with it, just coming up with a lot of wacky back and forth jokes about everyone and the whole situation.

Might notice I was trying to be very even with the screentime here; other than the introduction panel with Lore everyone appears in their own and commenting on two others. Kind of a little thing but wanted to give everyone pretty equal shine here, have a lot of fun with the group dynamics. Big cast this chapter so something I’ve been watching a lot besides this.

Not a huge amount to say but am kind of commenting on this at a point when I’m pretty tied up with other things. Been very much looking forward to submitting this one since the script was written, lot of stuff I’m happy with here. Think Val maybe steals the show between her comments, if only for her hypocrisy at the end, but really hard to say for sure, pleased with this one on the whole.

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Wolfintina 17th Jun 2022, 11:46 PM edit delete reply
Nicky sure loves to play the part of the annoying little brother, big sister objects to everything, yep it's perfect.
Marshman101 18th Jun 2022, 8:06 PM edit delete reply
I love the outfits.
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