Eheh... Really didn't get up until late. Lemme handle this now... ^^
But yeah, this is a bit of an odd transition, but it keeps up. We see more and more of Marvelous Man throughout the chapter, and honestly think this is where it sorta drags; there wasn't enough of this plotline to run alongside the examination thing, so I wound up stretching it quite a bit. Ah, well, hope you'll enjoy all the same.
So yeah, mostly trying to just establish Marshalls' character in this one. Hope that carries nicely enough. ^^ See more on that as we go on.
I honestly kind of forgot about this page and thought it cut from the last one to the one after this so yeah, obviously not going to have too much to say here.
So yeah, just one of those transition pages I guess. On a certain level kind of wonder if it might be better served to try and only show Marvelous Man as we see him on TV for a bit, like how the media paints him, but little late for that I guess. Eh.
If what you've got planned includes breaking or crashing through something then no it's not a better entrance, that man has no business being a superhero.
But yeah, this is a bit of an odd transition, but it keeps up. We see more and more of Marvelous Man throughout the chapter, and honestly think this is where it sorta drags; there wasn't enough of this plotline to run alongside the examination thing, so I wound up stretching it quite a bit. Ah, well, hope you'll enjoy all the same.
So yeah, mostly trying to just establish Marshalls' character in this one. Hope that carries nicely enough. ^^ See more on that as we go on.