Yeah, I really don't like the idea of Worfing the cyborgs and that's not what I'm going for here. Would it helps if I said I planned for them to have some awesome moments down the line to make up for this?
So... A lot planned for this chapter, clearly from what's being set up. ^^ I did especially like Spencer's reaction to the failed foiling of Antlers, and also the quick hint that Mech is the toughest and most competent member of the cyborgs by far. As for the thing with the legs... don't worry, we'll get to that. Also I like that we get a better look at that scorpion-tail thing.
Y'know until I actually sat down and wrote this I figured this whole fight scene would only be done in one page. It takes three pages (yeah, ends on Saturday) and it's STILL really rushed. Dunno what I was thinking.
That's a striking visual in the last panel, huh? Probably make a really good 400th page instead of just 398th.
But nope, 400th page is when we cut away from this actually! Yeah, as Adam mentioned, next page is the end of this scene. Is a little rushed as mentioned, but I do quite like how this scene comes out.
Not really much to say on this page though. Likely just wait and say more on the next one, probably have more to offer up there being the end of the sequence, but hope everyone enjoys!
So... A lot planned for this chapter, clearly from what's being set up. ^^ I did especially like Spencer's reaction to the failed foiling of Antlers, and also the quick hint that Mech is the toughest and most competent member of the cyborgs by far. As for the thing with the legs... don't worry, we'll get to that. Also I like that we get a better look at that scorpion-tail thing.
Y'know until I actually sat down and wrote this I figured this whole fight scene would only be done in one page. It takes three pages (yeah, ends on Saturday) and it's STILL really rushed. Dunno what I was thinking.