Okay, I'm honestly gonna try to stop griping about the proportions. This is around the time I started actively correcting myself in how to draw them. I went back after the page had been finished and tweaked the last panel until they looked more like little kids. Is it noticible?
I tried to make the kids aware of the danger they're facing but still wanting to do it, rather than just a "We have super powers, let's do cool stuff" sort of story. It seems like the that leads to shallower characters; it means more if they actually make the choice to become superheroes, I think, then just having it fall in their lap.
Think this is the first time the full poster is actually seen. Just something to note there.
Say this one's pretty good, though just noticed Lore's oddly pointy nose in the second panel. Nothing much to comment on color-wise, though - for the kids and the center be seeing mostly the same color scheme up until the palette's redone at the start of the next chapter.
I tried to make the kids aware of the danger they're facing but still wanting to do it, rather than just a "We have super powers, let's do cool stuff" sort of story. It seems like the that leads to shallower characters; it means more if they actually make the choice to become superheroes, I think, then just having it fall in their lap.