Comic 723 - The Lost Spell of Baron Fontainebleu, Page 5
6th Feb 2018, 11:00 PM
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Good to have a little back and forth here, and I do like Martina immediately deciding to shift her focus to Vespi. Think that kind of does a lot to demonstrate where her priorities lie and kind of show just how little she actually regards the kids as a threat.
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Wolfintina
7th Feb 2018, 1:34 PM
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You actually had Andy make that final boss comment about her outfit, that is funny, if it's this chaotic with only Martina and Franklin's replacement, what's going to happen when they run into the cyborgs and the BP crew.
Felt really weird writing Martina again after so long... An interesting twist is that while in earlier chapters the holier-than-thou stuff was obviously an act, here I wrote it with the idea she was being more genuine. You can read that as her becoming more into the role or something starting to believe her own story; either pretty much works. ^^ Really just doing it to try and give her more of a personality.
We don't quite learn the name of Franklin's replacement just yet, it's something that is hard to get into. ^^
Was doing the tornado bit at the end where it occurred to me "Ooo, wait, no, Lore should be able to stand ground on it. Likewise Jenny because of those gigantic legs." Was just sort of a neat thing to come about in the drawing of it.