Comic 883 - What Can I Do For Blue, Page 30
13th Aug 2019, 11:00 PM
in What Can I Do For Blue?
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Author Notes:
For what it's worth there were a couple other big reasons for that change but not really time to go into it yet, has to deal with some character motivations and stuff - was a very last minute change, think Adam was about to draw this page when I pointed out to him that as written this scene just didn't work.
So yeah, think this page came out pretty good, even if it is sort of a fake out on really seeing the kids in action again. Is at least as said less of one than was originally planned and it won't be too hugely long before we get to the next real fight. Cannot wait for that.
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babygirl
14th Aug 2019, 11:06 AM
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I think I know what is going to happen next the kids fight the Peacekeepers and at the end the town's people get in front of the kids and stop the Peacekeepers.
Wolfintina
14th Aug 2019, 5:23 PM
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Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.
Yeah, so we mentioned that Martin had advice for me in writing this fight? Well... The advice was to actually, y'know, write the fight. Originally page 27, the page of them all rushing to the scene, was going to end with the Peacekeepers standing over the already-deactived robot.
Funnily enough the plan always was to just have them get some fights on the robot and have the Peacekeepers end it early by having Protocol mentally shut it down, but I really wanted to cut it for time. That and I didn't have any ideas for the actual fight itself. Martin pointed out just HOW incompetent that made the Blues kids look, and told me to put it back in.
Naturally once I sat down to actually write the Blues kids in a fight scene I was amazed at how much I missed it, and the fight came out brief but very, very fun. ^^ Protocol still has to pull the plug herself, though.
Again, everything that makes this fight work are all the little interactions and asides the group has with each other. Really missed that stuff. ^^